DEVELOPMENTAL EDITING & COACHING

If your manuscript is ambitious, layered, and asking more of you than you expected (don’t they always?)—this is where I come in. My job is to help you get your creative vision on the written page. I tell you the truth about what your words are actually doing. Real craft feedback delivered as in-depth editorial assessments. Because you came here for the honest version, and that's the only one I know how to give.

Welcome to Grace Editorial. You're in the right place.

Your story knows what it wants to become.
My job is to help you get it fully on the page.

Photograph of Elisa Grace of Grace Editorial

THE WORK

The manuscripts that arrive here are usually doing several things at once and not all of them are working yet.

They're building worlds without understanding if they’re structural or decorative. They're carrying historical weight that's changing who the characters are allowed to be. They're navigating trauma, darkness, psychological complexity, sexuality—material that demands the reader feel something without be explained to. But it’s all asking more of the writer than the writer anticipated.

That's the work Grace Editorial digs into. Your creative ambition and the creative challenges that ambition creates on the page.

If your story is reaching for that—you’ve found the right place

Services

Grace Editorial offers six services across developmental editing and coaching—from a single chapter to a full manuscript to ongoing monthly work. The most common starting points are below.

Full Manuscript Developmental Edit

A deep structural read of your complete manuscript—what it's doing, where it still needs to go, and how to get it there without losing what makes it yours.

Your investment from $2,400 (Payment Plans available)

Partial Manuscript Diagnosis

Rigorous editorial feedback on the opening movement of your manuscript—where the story either earns its reader or loses them. Standalone or as a first step toward a full edit.

Your investment from $375

1:1 Coaching

For writers who want to think through their work in conversation. A specific problem, a structural knot, a chapter that refuses to behave. We work through it together.

Your investment from $135

Also available: revision passes, monthly retainer, and per-chapter review.

Grace Editorial — Find Your Service

Find the right service for where you are.

Answer a few questions. Get a recommendation that fits your manuscript and your moment.

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One more thing — how much time do you have before you need to move?
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The Deep Read
From $2,400 · Payment plans available
A comprehensive structural read of your complete manuscript — what it's doing, where it still needs to go, and how to get it there without losing what makes it yours. You'll receive a detailed editorial letter, inline manuscript annotations, and a follow-up call of up to two hours to work through the findings together.
Why this fits

You have a complete draft and you're ready for the full picture. The Deep Read gives you a map of the manuscript's structural life — where it's working, where the pressure drops, and what might restore it. This is where the real editorial work happens.

Also worth knowing
Not ready for the full investment? The Sample Read is a $65 cold read of your first 20 pages — the lowest-risk way to start.
Already had editorial feedback? The Second Look may be the right fit instead.
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The Deep Read
From $2,400 · Three-milestone payment structure available
A comprehensive structural read of your complete manuscript — what it's doing, where it still needs to go, and how to get it there without losing what makes it yours. The investment is structured across three milestones: on booking, on delivery of the editorial letter, and on completion of the follow-up call.
On the payment structure

The three-milestone payment structure spreads the investment across the engagement. Nothing is due in full upfront. Discuss the specifics on the discovery call — payment arrangements can be tailored to fit.

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Partial Manuscript Read
From $375 · Priced by manuscript scope and length
A written structural read of the manuscript you have so far, for authors who need feedback on an unfinished draft before they can finish it. You receive an editorial response letter covering structure, voice, pacing, character, and narrative engine in the pages that exist, so you can keep writing with a clearer map. Pricing depends on the scope and length of what you submit.
Why this fits

You're partway through a draft and you want to know what the pages are actually doing before you push on to the ending. A one-time read tells you where the work is strong, where it's losing pressure, and what to focus on as you finish.

Also worth knowing
Want ongoing support rather than one read? The Odyssey adds a call and flexible support through the end of your draft.
Want a lighter first step? The Sample Read is a $65 cold read of your first 20 pages.
Once the draft is finished, The Deep Read gives you the full structural picture.
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The Second Look
From $800
A focused revision-pass read for manuscripts that have already been through feedback and a significant rewrite. Not a full developmental edit — a targeted assessment of whether the revision addressed the structural issues and what, if anything, still needs attention.
Why this fits

You've done the work. You've revised. You want to know if it landed. The Second Look is for the manuscript that has already had a serious editorial conversation and needs confirmation rather than a first diagnosis.

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The Think Tank
From $135 per session
A single 60-minute coaching session focused on one specific problem. A structural knot. A character who isn't working. A scene that keeps failing. A chapter you can't get past. We work through it together — with or without submitted material.
Why this fits

You know what's wrong. You need a thinking partner, not a full editorial assessment. The Think Tank is the lowest-commitment way to experience working together — and the right service when the problem is specific and the manuscript needs a conversation, not a letter.

Also worth knowing
Want ongoing access rather than one session? The Long Game retainer gives you monthly structured support.
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The Odyssey
From $550 (Phase 1) · Phase 2 by arrangement
For the long-form work in progress. Phase 1 is an orientation read — I read what exists (100–200 pages), deliver a written structural briefing, and we work through it on a 60–90 minute call. Phase 2 is flexible ongoing support as you finish the draft: retainer, per-chapter review, periodic sessions, or whatever combination fits how you actually work.
Why this fits

You have substantial material but no finished draft — and waiting until completion to get any support means working without a structural sounding board for months or years. The Odyssey gives you an editorial ally now, before the ending exists. By the time we're deep in Phase 2, I know your manuscript. That changes everything about the quality of the support.

Also worth knowing
Just want one written read of what you have? The Partial Manuscript Read starts at $375, with no ongoing support.
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As You Go
Per chapter · Rates on enquiry
Per-chapter editorial review as you draft. Submit chapters as they're written and receive focused feedback before moving forward. Structural observations, voice notes, character tracking — whatever the chapter needs. Flexible — engage when you're drafting, pause when you're not.
Why this fits

You draft continuously and want feedback integrated into the process rather than delivered at the end. As You Go is built for the writer who wants editorial intelligence in the room while the manuscript is still being made.

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The Long Game
From $450 per month
Monthly retainer coaching for writers who want consistent structured support across a project. Regular calls, manuscript check-ins, and ongoing access to editorial thinking as the work develops. Built around your pace — not a rigid schedule.
Why this fits

You want accountability, structure, and a consistent editorial presence across the life of the project. The Long Game is for writers who are serious about finishing and want a thinking partner who knows the work over time — not just at specific intervention points.

Recommended First Step
A Discovery Call
Complimentary · 45 minutes
The right service when you're stuck or just starting depends entirely on where you are and what the story needs. The discovery call is 45 minutes — we talk about the manuscript, where you are, what's blocking you, and what kind of support would actually help. No pitch. No pressure. Just a real conversation.
Why this fits

You don't need a service yet. You need a conversation. The discovery call is where we figure out together whether Grace Editorial is the right fit — and if so, what that looks like for where you are right now.

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First Page Effect: The Sample Read
$65 · Limited to 5 spots per round
A true cold read of your first 20 pages — extended to the natural end of your chapter, wherever that falls. A written, honest first-reaction response: what's working, what isn't yet, and what a fresh reader actually experiences on the page. No calls, no follow-up meetings — just the read.
Why this fits

You want to test the waters — to find out what a cold read reveals about your opening pages, or to get a real feel for working with Grace Editorial before committing to a larger service. This is the lowest-risk way in.

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Also worth knowing
Still drafting? The Partial Manuscript Read goes deeper into what you have so far.
Have a complete draft? The Deep Read gives you the full structural picture.

Not sure the finder got it right? Book a complimentary discovery call — 45 minutes, no pitch, no pressure. We'll figure it out together.

What I Look For In Your Book

Your manuscript is waiting.
So is the conversation.

Complimentary 45-minute discovery call—no pitch, no pressure.